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Document #2
ORIGIN:
This document is a secondary document because it is a translation of a translation of a "speech" made by a Native American Wovoka (Jack Willson).
PURPOSE:
The document's purpose was to allow the Americans to read what was said. The purpose of the oral message was to inform the other Native Americans that they must dance for 5 days and obey the Americans and not cause them trouble or harm, and at the end of the dancing, when they returned, the messiah would come down and return the Native Americans and their land back to its roots. He would also make the Americans leave their land.
VALUE:
For one thing, this document, which the Americans used as an excuse to attack the Native Americans, shows not only that the Native Americans were going to act peacefully, but also that the would obey the Americans. This means that the Americans attacked the Native Americans out of either fear or desire, but not self-defense.
LIMITATION:
Though this document tells us that the Native Americans were going to obey the Americans peacefully, it does not tell the Americans' side of the story, so the cause of the attack cannot truly be determined from this document alone.
Stephen, good first OPVL attempt. You want to shift your focus from discussing the content of the source and summarizing what it said to evaluating it as a piece of historical evidence. You want to refer back to origin and purpose to do this. For instance, you told me that this is a translation of a translation...does this put into question if the actual words of Wovoka held up through all this translating? Just food for lot, we'll have lots more practice with these darn things!
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